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Sasuke and Sakura: a ninja love story

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Chihiro_Uchiha, May 23, 2007.

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  1. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    At this time, Sasuke is training with Orochimaru. Sakura sat on the bench where she last saw him...when he left the village. Sasuke's words still floated around her head.

    "Sakura, thank you".

    As she quietly sat, she thought of him standing with Orochimaru with a blood stained sword in his hand and dead bodies of ninja surrounding them. She shivered at the thought of that. She looked up at the sky and remembered her missions with Naruto, Kakashi, and Sasuke.

    "Sakura Chan"

    Sakura turned her head to see Naruto walking up to her nad sitting next to her.

    "What Naruto, I'm not going on a date with you," she snapped.

    "Don't worry, I'm not"

    "Well, what is it"

    "Nothing, I was just looking for you since we havent talked for a while and-"

    "WHAT IF I DON'T WANT TO TALK," Sakura snapped.

    Naruto tried to talk for no words came out.

    "Idiot".

    Sakura stomped off and Naruto still sat there with his mouth wide open.
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    At Orochimaru's hideout, Sasuke leaned against the wall silently. He diddnt let anyone talk to him since he was'nt in the mood. When someone tried to talk to him he gave them "the look". Even Karin or his teamates couldnt talk to him. He stood up and started to walk out.

    "Sasuke, where are you going"

    "I'm going for a walk, AND DON'T YOU DARE FOLLOW"
     
  2. Kisara_Momochi Forever alive in my heart Haku

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    Well, i love the pairing of sasusaku, and i'm a sucker for romance story. but this was kinda short, so i can't tell you exaclty what i think about it, but i do want you to keep at it, and update
     
  3. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    okay I'll try to make the next chapter longer
     
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  5. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    I like it so far,there Basicly Acting like each other and they don't even know it!!!!!Keep up the good work!
     
  6. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    It was spectaculor amazing incredible it was okay.

    The Sakura part was mediocre, but the Sasuke part was one of the worst I have ever saw.
     
  8. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Okay, I dont know why...but.................of well
     
  9. ninja_of_death ehh....

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    it was pretty good! keep it up!
     
  10. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Thank you very much, if you have any ideas for the story, just wtirte them and I'll try as hars as I can to put it in
     
  11. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Chapter 2

    Sakura walked out of the village muttering what Naruto said. She was really annoyed and upset. She just thought of Sasuke every second, especially that thought she had. Then she heard a crack behind a tree. She was startled and turned quickly...no one was there. She took out a kunai knife.

    "SHOW YOURSELF".

    No one answered, all she heard was fottsteps walking throught the trees. Then...she heard a *CHING*. Someone was gonna take out a sword and attack from behind. She quickly turned and went in a stance.

    "CHA, IM READY!" The Inner Sakura, cleched a fist.

    "Sakura Chan"

    Sakura was startled. Someone was behind her....right behind her. She reconised the voice, she felt breathing down her neck. She turned slowly.

    "Sa-Sasuke...Kun"

    Sasuke looked at her with sencere eyes. Sakura looked ta him with shock. It has been a while, since she last saw him when she was with Sai and Naruto. She felt a tear foll down her cheek.

    "Hmph, youre as useless as when we were togenther on a team"

    "YOURE THE ONE WHOS USELESS, YOU JOINED OROCHIMARU AFTER I TRIED AND TRIED -"

    "shutup"

    Sasuke appeared behind her and put a sword up to her neck. He put his mouth up to her ear.

    "Get out of here, go back to the village"

    Sakura was silent since she was confused.

    " *SIGH*, I LO-"

    "SASUKE"

    Sasuke groaned.

    "I TOLD THEM NOT TO FOLLOW, Sakura, get away form me, I dont want you to get hurt"

    He turned and looked at Sakura, who was shocked by what she was hearing.

    "I- dont want to leave you"

    Sasuke pished her in some bushes. He put his hand on her mouth.

    "Stay there, and keep quiet!"

    Sasuke turned and saw Karin.

    "I told you not to follow," Sasuke snapped

    Karin was silent.

    "I just wanted to see what you were doing"

    "NOW YOU KNOW NOW GO AWAY KARIN".

    Sasuek glared at Karin as she walked away.
     
  12. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Listen people, I nned tro know about Karin, her abilities etc. I dont care who tells me I just wanta know. Thank you
     
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    lol,the manga doesn't tell us you....not worth a insult..
     
  14. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    okay, I just wanted to know about Karin so I can make her be in the story without messing her up...I guess she'll only be in a few chapters
     
  15. Kisara_Momochi Forever alive in my heart Haku

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    ok, now it's a little confusing. He seems to keep materilzing out of thin air in places. But other then that. It's one of my fav pairing, so even if you said they took off all their clothes and ran naked through ramdom peoples' sprinkler, i would have to say THIS IS AWESOME, so . . . .

    THIS IS AWESOME
     
  16. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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  17. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    kisara,sorry thats my sister and she crazy ,but i think it's really good so far.Keep up the good work!
     
  18. DethStryque *Murderous Intent*

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    could be better...i wasnt feeling it that much but atleast you tried
     
  19. Vance Banned

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    Not impressive, you need to work A LOT on all of your fics.
     
  20. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Thank you for all the replys...VANCE YOUR NOT MY TEACHER, thnak you for the advice but...I TRY
     
  21. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Chapter 3

    When Karin dissapeared in the trees, Sasuke turned around.

    "Sakura"

    No answer.

    "SAKURA, you can come out now"

    No one came out of the bushes. Sasuke felt an urge to look. He went to the bush and looked over, NO ONE WAS THERE. All that was there was a note. He picked it up.

    Sasuke,
    we have youre girlfreind. If you want her back...ALIVE...meet me in the Valley of the End. If you lose, I will take over your body...if you win, you can have your girlfreind back. You have one night to get here...if you dont...SHE WILL DIE. Orochimaru and Kabuto.



    Sasuke crumpled up the letter and ripped it up into bits. He gritted his teeth.

    "Why am I so stupid, they grabbed her while I was talking to Karin...CRAP...that was all part of that plan"

    "SASUKE"

    Sasuke turned and saw Naruto. He looked like he ran a long way.

    "WHERES SAKURA," he screamed.

    "She got kidnapped"

    "AM I SUPPOSED TO BELEAVE THAT"

    "I tried to protect her...IDIOT...but she got kidnapped by Orochimaru while I was being delayed"

    "I DONT CARE...YOU'LL PAY FOR LEAVING THE VILLAGE...IT ENDS HERE"

    " You're planning to take me on"

    Naruto diddnt say anything. All he had was an angry face.

    "Fine"
     
    Last edited: Jun 2, 2007
  22. Kisara_Momochi Forever alive in my heart Haku

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    DARN KABUTO ---Sorry i can't curse my loverly oroy--- DARN KABUTO how dare he steal sakura out from under sasuke's nose like that. for shame SHAME!!!!

    This is turning out to be a really awesome story. keep up the good work. I can't wait for more.
     
  23. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Thank you Kisara =)
    I like coments like that
     
  24. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    Yes I love these kind of parts to storys there so sweet and romantice.
     
  25. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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  26. ninja_of_death ehh....

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    yay! finally a good sasusaku fanfiction!! please continue it
     
  27. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Thank you and I will continue
     
  28. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Chapter 4

    Sasuke and Naruto faced each other. Naruto had an angry look in his eyes and had a clenched fist.

    "Sasuke"

    "What"

    "I'll win, for Sakura!"

    "I DID NOT KIDNAP HER YOU IDIOT"

    "SHUTUP"

    Naruto started to run to Sasuke to throw a pinch at him. Sasuke caught the punch and kicked him in the stomach. Naruto got up right when he fell to the ground and did a handsign.

    "SHADOW CLONE JUTSU"

    Naruto summoned over a hundred of himself. They surrounded Sasuke with no way out. They all got ready to attack. Sasuke got an idea.

    "NA-RU-TO UZUMAKI BARRAGE"

    But, a log was in his place"

    "OH SHOOT"

    Naruto looked around wildly for him.

    "I know youre here Sasuke," he cried

    "Oh, you mean...RIGHT BEHIND YOU"

    Sasuke took out his sword and put it up to Naruto's neck. All the shadow clones dissapeared at that moment.

    "...fool...you'll never be Hokage"

    Naruto was silent. Sasuke took out a kunai.

    "I diddnt want to do this Naruto...but...I have no choice, you diddnt beleave me...so I'll kill you NOW"

    Sasuke flung the kunai into Naruto's chest. He fell forward. When Naruto fell to the ground, Sasuke looked down at him.

    Two hours since Sauske walked away.

    "Naruto Kun!"
     
  29. Kisara_Momochi Forever alive in my heart Haku

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    Dude as I have said many of times before. This is one heck of a good sasusaku fanfic. Although the first couple sentences that i read made me laugh

    I.E.

    "Sasuke"

    "What?"

    "I'll win, for Sakura."

    "I DIDN'T KIDNAP HER YOU IDIOT"


    Classic. I LOVE IT.

    P;ease continue.


    Hey could you also check out my sasusaku story. heres the link

    X

    you know, tell me what you think i need to improve on. I hope i can be good like you.

    Well can't wait for more, so HURRY UP!!!!!

    See when you get good, you have a posse of fans that will kill you if you don't write/ type quickly.

    however I am not like that

    my sister is.

    My sister is naruto_fan_gurl101

    Sadly we're actually sisters. Not e-sister. Step sisters.

    And she crazy.

    Watch out for her.

    She threaten this other dude (*twitch* with my threat actually) because he would continue a love story he started writing.

    Isn't that right Sen

    Ack, I'm babbling.

    Sorry.

    I shall be gone.

    *me being gone*
     
  30. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Chapter 5

    Kakashi, Hinata, Neji, Rock Lee, and Kiba found Naruto on the ground. There was a cut on his chest and blood stained his jumpsuit. Hinata bursted to tears and Neji embraced her. Everyone else looked dwon at Narutos dead body. Kakashi kneeled down over Naruto. He looked at the wounds.

    "Sasuke...he killed him". Hinata looked at Kakashi as everyone went silent.

    "Uhn...wha...what are you guys doing here"

    "NARUTO KUN...YOUR ALIVE"
    **********************************************************
    Meanwhile, in the Valley of the End.

    Orochimaru and Kabuto waited for Sasuke. Sakura was guarded by the Sound Five in a small barrier. She was tied up and had tape on her mouth. At the moment she was passed out.

    "Lord Orochimaru, do you really expect Sasuke to come"

    "Yes...this IS his girlfreind after all"

    "Do you want him to come"

    "Yes, because I know I will win"

    Orochimaru smirked as Kabuto smiled.
    **********************************************************

    Sasuke sat in a cave to rest for a while. He felt (all of a sudden) so mad at himself. He let Sakura get kidnapped and he thought he killed Naruto. He looked at his sword that had blood stains on it. He threw it across the cave and it clanged into the wall and onto the floor. He got up and picked up the sword.

    "It's time...to confront Orochimaru"
     
  31. Kisara_Momochi Forever alive in my heart Haku

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    again another awesome post.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that is all
     
  32. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    LOL, thanks, and I seems the problem with my thread is done so dont worry anymore
     
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    Chapter 6

    Sasuke walked in the woods. On his way to the Valley of the End, he thought of a perfect strategy. He also thoguth of Sakura and how much he loved her. He stopped.

    "Why was I so foolish...I joined Orochimaru and Sakura was so upset...and now shes in danger and the only way to rescue her is to defeat Orochimaru"

    "OR WILL IT..."

    Sasuke turned and saw Karin leaning against a tree, adjusting her glasses.

    "What is it, Karin," he snapped

    "Oh, nothing much...just that...I was sent to kill you"

    Sasuke knew it was Orochimarus doing.

    "Actually, I lied"

    "DONT DO THAT AGAIN"

    "Youre near the Valley of the End and I'm supposed the wait for you to come and tell Lord Orochimaru...well wait for you"

    Karin walked away and jumped into the valley. Sasuke felt his heart thump.

    "Sakura, I'm coming"

    Sasuke jumped into the valley.

    "Ah, Sasuke, we've been waiting for you"

    "Lets just get it over with"
     
  34. 春野 サクラ Tsunade's Apprentice

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    interesting.. please continue :)
     
  35. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    i love this ff it doesnt suck like mine!
     
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    Chapter 7

    Orochimaru smirked. Sasuke took out his katana sword and glared.

    "You know Sasuke,if you lose you let me take over your body"

    Sasuke was silent. Orochimaru did some hand seals.

    "Remember, just the sharingan wont save you. NINJA ART SUMMONING JUTSU"

    At that moment, in a huge puff of smoke, a huge snake appeared. Sakura, who just woke up when she heard Sasuke's voice, took out a file to cut the rope while the Sound Five was'nt looking. When the rope was finally cut .She took off the tape and watched the fight. Sasuke and Orochimaru were on the snake throwing blows at each other. Orochimaru did some handsigns.

    "NINJA ART WATER DRAGON MISSILE"

    "FIRE STYLE GRAND FIRE BALL JUTSU"

    The water dragon and the fire ball clashed. Smoke filled the air. Sasuke stood where he was.

    "Behind you"

    Sasuke turned his head to strike but Orochimaru grabbed him by his neck. Sasuke gripped Orochimarus wrist and was struggling to breathe and break free.

    "SASUKE," Sakura screamed.

    "Shutup," Sakon snapped.

    When Sasukes life and little time left, Orochimaru flung him off the snake. BOOM, Sasuke hit the ground. Orochimaru appeared over him, the snake and barrier dissapeared. Sasuke tried to get up, but his body wont let him.

    "Orochimaru"

    "Yes"

    "Let Sakura go...and I will let you have my body"

    "SASUKE"

    "Sorry...Sakura"

    "Wait, lets let his girlfreind see him one last time,"Orochimaru said.

    Sakura ran over to Sasuke. There was blood dripping fom his mouth.

    "Sakura...I'm...sorry"

    "Dont leave me Sasuke," Sakura cried as tears ran down her cheeks and onto Sasuke.

    "Sakura...dont waste your tears on me"

    "Can you hurry up, you have one more minute," Orochimaru said.

    "I love you Sasuke"

    "Me to dont forget that"

    They kissed.

    "FORBIDDEN JUTSU"

    Sasuke closed his eyes. The last thing he saw the Sakura, crying her head off. Orochimaru was know in control of Sasuke.

    "HA, I DID IT"

    Kabuto, picked up Sasuke and they all dissapeared...leaving Sakura behind.
     
  39. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Omg, what drama in that chapter =(
     
  40. sakura san Member

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    *crying and claping* MAKE MORE!
     
  41. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    Thank You Very Much Sakura San. I think I'll be an awesome writer one day
     
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    Chapter 8

    "SAKURA CHAN"

    Sakura looked up and looked around. Someone was looking for her...but who.

    "SAKURA"

    It was Naruto. He was calling for her.

    "NARUTO...IM DOWN HERE"

    She made out a figure with blonde, spikey hair looking down at her and jumping down.

    "You okay Sakura," Naruto asked.

    Sakura just looked down.

    "Wheres Sasuke...I want to teach him a lession"

    Sakura started to cry again. She struggled to hold it back.

    "Naruto...He's...he's-"

    "WHAT"

    "Hes gone"

    Narutos eyes widend in shock. Sasuke, the last of the Uchiha clan, one of the most powerful ninjas Naruto ever knew...was gone.

    "What happened?"

    "He fought Orochimaru and tried to rescue me from him...then he gave up his body to him and he died when Orochimaru did Forbiden Jutsu"

    Naruto looked away. Sakura was quiet.

    "C'mon Sakura Chan...lets go"

    Naruto took his hand out to Sakura and lead her out of the Valley of the End.
     
  43. Kisara_Momochi Forever alive in my heart Haku

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    GO GET HIM SAKURA-CHAN *I cries tears of sorrow* DON'T LET THAT DECIPABLE, AND VERY HOT, AND HUNKY, AND VERY....... SORRY, OROCHIMARU TAKE OVER YOUR PERCIOUS SASUKE-KUN.............................. *turns to hyuga ninja* As for you, WRITE MORE PLEASE, I can't take all the suspense. I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  44. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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    Kisara,and he not hunky or sexy kakashi is,and for the commment where you call me crazy i'm not SO STOP SAYING THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!As for you hyuga ninja keep up the good work and please write some more.
     
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    Chapter 9

    "Sakura chan," Naruto asked as he set up a fire that night when they stopped to rest.

    "Yeah"

    "Why do you care about Sasuke so much"

    "BECAUSE I DO," Sakura snapped as she stood up

    Naruto fell backward since Sakura was glaring over him like she was way taller than him.

    "Sakura, calm down"

    "I WILL NOT CALM DOWN, IDIOT, SASUKES GONE AND-"

    "Sakura look out"

    Naruto jumped on Sakura as a kunai zoomed over their heads and hit a tree.

    "Woah, what the heck was that," Naruto asked as he got up slowly.

    "I dont know, but I think someones watching us," Sakura answered

    "I'll go and check it out"

    Naruto took otu a kunai and dissapeared in the trees.

    "Hm, fool...I knew he will fall for my trap," Sakura smirked

    Sakura quietly ran off to find Orochimaru...AND KILL HIM. She ran through the trees. When she was a half a mile away from Naruto she heard him calling her name.

    "I have to kepp moving"
     
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  47. naruto_fan_gurl101 Sen:the stupidest ninja ever!

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  48. Caitlyn Jenner Nightcrawler

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    if he was you'd be better.
     
  49. Chihiro_Uchiha I will never back down!

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    okay, I knew that chapter diddnt have that much detail in it sorry.

    LATER: okay I edited. Its has a little more detail. AND GOOD TRY WEEZY, YOURE ON MY IGNORE LIST LOL
     
  50. Kisara_Momochi Forever alive in my heart Haku

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    Hyuganinja, you are awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And i love how sakura fooled naruto..... he he he he's such an idiot. well gotta go, and update please
     
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