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Kishi Fucked Up The War

Discussion in 'Konoha Library' started by Eliyua23, May 4, 2012.

  1. Eliyua23 Well-Known Member

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    It took me a long time to admit but this War has been done horribly, this is infact the worse arc since the penis arc in terms of character development, even the fights and the match ups have been lackluster so far but most importantly it feels rushed and it has failed to create any emotional impact.

    What this War Should Have Been About

    1. Naruto's growth as a leader

    2. Younger Generation Surpassing The Old

    3. Naruto Forming Bonds With Characters Across The Shinobi World


    If kishi knew all along that Naruto/Killer B would be involved in the war, why go thru with the bullshit plot of hiding him when the reader knew all along that they would enter, it just looks ridiculous Killer B/Naruto just running around doing thier own thing when Raikage/Tsunade could've sent an organized unit to capture Kabuto and end Edo Tensei.

    Here's How The Events of The War Should've Played Out

    1. Killer B Trains With Naruto

    2. After Training Raikage Tests Naruto's Strength and He Passes

    3. Naruto is Put In Charge Of a Unit of Young Shinobi To Capture Rikudo

    4. This includes Onoki's Granddaughter, Omoi,Karuai,Choujiro,Killer B,Sai

    5. Naruto Gives Awesome Speech To Rally His Troops

    6. Naruto's group encounters Deidara

    7. Sai vs Deidara Art vs Art

    8. Sai and Deidara fight a close battle no bullshit, but Sai eventually wins living up to the hype Danzo gave him gaining new fans

    9. Fodder in Naruto's crew gets raped by Zetsu

    10. Naruto's first time losing people in the War

    11. Break to Team 10 vs Asuma

    12. Darui vs Kakuzu, Gin/Kin stay the same

    13. Naruto group ambushed by Zabuza w Haku and a couple swordsmen of the Mist.

    14. Naruto and crew take a couple out

    15. Naruto leaves while Omoi,Karui,Choujiro stays behind

    16. Choujiro vs Zabuza w Haku

    17. This fight Choujiro shows some awsome shit this is a brutal sword fight to the bitter end, Choujiro wins Kamakaze style stabbing the sword through himself and Zabuza, Choujiro doesn't make it, this is the saddest most emotionally impactful part of the manga it sends grown men to tears.

    18. Naruto Killer B make their way to Gaara & Onoki

    19. Edo Kages enter the fray

    20. Naruto still one shots Muu

    21. Gaara/Onoki still takes on TrollKage , 4th Kazekage

    22. Killer B takes on 3rd Raikage

    23. Naruto moves ahead towards Kabuto's base

    24. Meanwhile Sasuke Takes off his bandages and leaves the base

    25. Sasuke is confronted by Nagato

    26. Naruto is confronted by Itachi

    27. Sasuke is getting his ass handed to him by Nagato in the worse way, Nagato mocks the sharingan as the inferior Doujutsu

    28. Itachi vs Naruto is similar to how it was close Taijutsu exchange, countering each others abilities, talking about Sasuke, then Kabuto exerts full control cutting off Itachi's personality.

    29. Sasuke activates stage 4 Susanoo and eventually activates the Tosuka sword, sealing Nagato similar to what Itachi did

    30. Itachi hits Naruto with Tsukuyomi, Naruto finally works together with Kurama to break it this is an emotional part of the battle.

    31. Itachi activates stage 4 Susanoo and Totsuka sword , Naruto activates BM and starts dodging , Naruto is hit with Totsuka

    32. Clone Feint, Naruto then hits Susanoo with Bjuudama , Itachi is disintegrated.

    33. Naruto then faces Kabuto

    34. EMS Sasuke faces EMS Madara

    35. Tobi faces the 5 Kages

    36. Kabuto tells Naruto How he idolized him and how he influenced him down his current path

    37. Madara mocks Sasuke teaches him about the history of the uchiha VOTE

    38. Tobi's mask is cracked by Raikage and his identity is revealed

    39. Naruto defeats Kabuto with that jutsu and Kabuto flashback, he's converted

    40. Sasuke defeats Madara with a combination of Izanagi/Izanami that surpasses Danzo/Madara's

    41. The five Kages combined with the rest of the alliance defeat Tobi, sad story revealed blah blah blah

    42. aftermath, dealing with the loses , Naruto gives another awesome speech,

    43. The End
     
  2. Nikushimi Savior

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    Tl;dr.

    But your general premise is something I agree with- Kishi rushed the war and it has turned out pretty bad so far. He should've dedicated more time to each fight and concentrated on using the Edo Tensei zombies more intelligently. I feel like we have seen them at their worst and have totally missed seeing their true combat potential.

    He also should have gotten his balls out of his purse and killed some important characters.
     
  3. jNdee~ MangSlayer

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    Too much power up
     
  4. Gabe Murim Grand Master

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    i disagree i like how the war has been so far. i think naruto facing tobi is the best thing they have been represnted as light and darkness for a while. they were meant to fight. plus he was responsible for the kyuubi attack where narutos parents lost his life naruto vs tobi was fated to happen. the kages facing madara is better as well it shows the old power/old leadership madara/shodai against the new power and leadership the kages. and i like itachi vs kabuto old spies of kohona that were used. also why would nagato face sasuke and not naruto, sasuke had no connection to nagato would not have made any sense.
     
  5. Imagine //\\

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    Kishi fucked something up whats new. :giogio I bet Kabuto becomes an ally to Naruto also.
     
  6. narutored23 in konoha killin nin gangster

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    Omg you actually explained almost the exact same thing kishi just did in the war almost 60 something chapters ago only, because naruto wasn't in it like you wanted I don't see the difference, maybe one thing you almost just predicted and might happen for next chapter.

    Overall kishi just did fine in the direction he's going a lot of side character development.
    Garra being a lot stronger, kabuto using his triumph card, all of the edo kages, the young generation passing the older generation and the crow job.
     
  7. Ishi no Ishi 石の意思

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  8. jNdee~ MangSlayer

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    :arg that's a totally retarded action if it happens
     
  9. taydev Active Member

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    Ohmygod, this! Especially #2.
     
  10. Doge Everything I say is serious.

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    Fixed.



    Kishi obviously doesn't intend for the alliance to have any issues. This manga is going to become a crappy series in which the hero wins every single time without an issue.
     
  11. tnorbo Active Member

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    heck if the bad guys crushed the good guys when they had the chance instead of playing around, this war would be ten times better.
     
  12. Bloo Shadow Shinobi

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    My main issue is that not a single main character died. I was actually excited when Onoki got shot by the 2nd Mizukage, not because I dislike Onoki, but just because it would be the first major death.
     
  13. ajinko Prince

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    Edo Madara is the only one posing any threat.
     
  14. Crystaltiger Nuke-Nin

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    What I personally dislike at the war is, that people we haven't seen so much of, were sealed way too early. I was looking forward to see some Kimimaro action or some epic moves of the Kirigakure sword ninjas, but they were quite one-paneled, that's sad. There was more potential in this characters. Facing the fact that Itachi was revived without his illnes would imply that Kimimaro would be fit too and show some badass moves, but there were no such moves until now. And from 7 awesome sword ninjas only one is still alive, the rest was one-paneled...
     
  15. Rios Well-Known Member

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    You gotta learn to appreciate the badness and just laugh it off.
     
  16. vinnycool sannin sage of the retards

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    i would of enjoyed the manga if it turned out as in op
     
  17. Girl I don't care Active Member

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    Fuck off Madara shits on all your younger generations and I'm loving it.
     
  18. Mantux31 Niekas nesupranta ka rasau cia

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    Kabuto has something up his sleeve with being so mysterious n shit
    IMO he's gonna betray Tobi in the midst of the war, but Tobi knew that Kabuto would betray him and does something accordingly, but then Kabuto knew that tobi knew that kabuto will betray him, so he made a plan, but then tobi would shock everyone by knowing that kabuto knew that tobi knew that kabuto knew that tobi knew that kabuto is going to betray him and destroys the world while naruto is facing sasuke.
     
  19. Kusa Well-Known Member

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    An important character has to die and Sasuke needs to show his real power,then the war is going to be fine.
     
  20. Prince Vegeta Neg Me xD

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    :oh Lmfao

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  21. fullmetaljuzz New Member

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    While it isn't perfect, it could have been worse and definitely isn't screwed up, I mean the war against Aizen in Bleach was the effed up one. Some battles were interesting but it was an endless stream of fights and Aizen soloing with hardly any plot movement.
     
  22. Melodie ̣

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    So you're asking for the war to be ridiculously predictable?
     
  23. bloodplzkthxlol .

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    tobi started it, what do you expect? he's a failure through and through both as a villain and a character overall.
     
  24. Viper █▬█ █ ▄█▀ ▄█▀ ▄█▀

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    This war has all become about Madara.:giogio
     
  25. Whirlpool Triumvir

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    I agree with everything, except Naruto should kill Tobi. Tobi was the prolem for everything in Narutos life afterall, and we wouldn't see the whole bijuu brofist bla bla rikudo-sennin bla bla
     
  26. Chuck &#32

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    disappointed also with the lack of any major deaths on the Alliance's side, it's about time Onoki, Bee, Gai and Sakura :)maybe) died



    :rofl
    :LOS



    dammit, you pointed it out first :(



    this can be interpreted as a good thing :amuse
     
  27. Namikaze Naruto Sennin

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    There were about roughly 40000 shinobi who have died for this war alone, and yet people here is still craving for another death :notrust

    Two death can make a people like Iruka, in fact shinobi's world is losing almost half of its population, which is bold.

    However, I agree to some extent that Kishi is rushing this arc, and to be honest I don't know why'd he do that considering that many people guess this arc is the last, or second last arc at least.
     
  28. Saturday Hello, Wherever You Are

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    I think it cold of been done better. Some parts had me hooked up overall I'm disappointed.
     
  29. Ghost Active Member

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    Naruto should've met Zabuza and Haku...
     
  30. Chuck &#32

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    40 000 fodder, it's still not good enough :villa
     

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