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HINATA NAKED!! OMFG!!

Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Dimezanime88, Oct 13, 2006.

  1. Dimezanime88 Tha Blak Demen

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    Lol, nah, she's not, but she's close to it.:)


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  2. Heero Summer

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    she looks great but, the only thing that bugs me is that her face looks a little to thin
     
  3. Dimezanime88 Tha Blak Demen

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    Yea, well we all aren't Kishimoto now are we? Too bad these days other artist are not entitled to their own style when doing fanarts...
     
  4. omnichild is the total win

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    I don't think Hyuga Byrnsie meant that in a mean way. S/he was trying to give you a critique. And I have to agree with them. Her face is too thin. Not because you did a bad job or the fact that you have a different style then Kishi. Her face looks to thin for her body. Her arms also appear to be a bit stubbish. I am not expert in drawing, gods know I cannot do so myself. And it could just be the illusion created by her shirt/coat but her arms really do appear a bit short.
     
  5. Dirty Harry Active Member

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    :nosebleed Wow man, nice job. I pretty much like all the fan-art you put out.
     
  6. Dimezanime88 Tha Blak Demen

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    You know what, I GIVE UP!! Seriously, I give up!
     
  7. z0dd Noob Saibot

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    She looks depressed... still good job though. You know, you shouldn't give up, you can't expect to be perfect everytime this is still a lot better than a lot of people can do. Make the art yours...make it your own style, Never quit!
     
  8. omnichild is the total win

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    -sigh- hun no one is telling you, your artwork sucks or that you should quit it. We are trying to give you constructive cricticism. Be grateful that we are willing to try and help you improve your artwork.
     
  9. boooabdo New Member

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  10. UzumakiYondaime ZOMFGWTFBBQITSHIM!!!

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  11. Lithe-Fider My brain explodes

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    Aweee you suck XD (for tricking me like that) but your pic is very awesome so I forgive you :p I myself PRAISE you for actually giving her some muscle tone, I think it's hot.

    Hands look kinda flat (need some shading for definition), but are in preportion so it's not too bad.

    I like the soft lines that are done in brown for the drawing too, it looks really cool.
     
  12. Lonely Soul Daughter of Smoke & Bone

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    You did a very great job! :) I've seen your gallery before; you're an awesome artist.
     
  13. Rashman Leader of the Franchise

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    it looks like hinata was forced to take that picture. from the expression you gave she doesnt seem very happy with whats she doing. besides pictures like these dont fit a character like hinata.
    but the art and colouring are good.. there no doubt about that dude :thumbs
     
  14. Mew♥ Reading fanfics :D

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  15. Shadow Slayer Poof no Jutsu

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    Quite the nice drawing. Keep up the good work!
     
  16. ramseyT Crazy is better

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    ooooh i liked that drawing, lol, but ya hinatas head seemed a little out of porportion
     
  17. DarkFire immune to modfuck

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    it says i'm not allowed to see it? Do i have to register or sumthing?
     
  18. MiNaC Uncomfortable Silence

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    Decent pic :)

    Yeah, you need to have a deviantart account to view it.
     
  19. miina Im a guy,miina old nickname;_;

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    Great! But when i scroll down too her waist down, i loose intrest...
     
  20. Dimezanime88 Tha Blak Demen

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    Lol, the art may suck, but I can see there is alot of perverts here. One, Rashman, exactly who would be happy taking a picture like that???!
     
  21. Haruka modkop

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    Pros:
    • Oh god, why did I click on this thread? Probably because your name was in it. :/
    • Keep it up.

    Cons:
    • Hinata's face is a bit too long. You might want to fix it by moving her chin up abit.
    • Her arms seem very short and cramped. I don't know how you can fix it now though.
    • I really don't like nude pics, make her put some clothes on!
    • You should darken your shading abit, it's too bright.

    However, your art is very good and I hope to see more!
     
  22. Dimezanime88 Tha Blak Demen

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    Teh, Haruka out of all people...You speak as if I have a Wacom...Anyways, thanks for the "critiques" guys.
     
  23. Haruka modkop

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    Also, your style changed. I miss it.
     
  24. Chee Haters Gonna Hate

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    The deviation was deleted...:(
     
  25. Killer McKills Deathbringer

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    I feel bad that I immediately clicked on this thread when I read the title....
     
  26. TheStoryMaster Member

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  27. sasukecopyninja In The Midst of Your Angst

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    wow dime you overreact, freaking gorw up n take some critisism. People are only suggesting what they think would make the image better. Wow you know im take graphics art in school you kill yourself here if your like this when someone says its a good picture jus this would make it evenb etter, so grow up man, take ppls opinions in to consideration, if you dont like their ideas then dont use em that simple.
     
  28. Dimezanime88 Tha Blak Demen

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    And if you don't like that, DX gots two words for you...
     
  29. sj2k Official NF Red Sox Fan

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    It says the link is not there, I have seen alot of your pics before and like them, adn would love to see this too, if you get the link fixed could you let me know, thanks
     

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