Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Dimezanime88, Oct 13, 2006.
Lol, nah, she's not, but she's close to it.
she looks great but, the only thing that bugs me is that her face looks a little to thin
Yea, well we all aren't Kishimoto now are we? Too bad these days other artist are not entitled to their own style when doing fanarts...
I don't think Hyuga Byrnsie meant that in a mean way. S/he was trying to give you a critique. And I have to agree with them. Her face is too thin. Not because you did a bad job or the fact that you have a different style then Kishi. Her face looks to thin for her body. Her arms also appear to be a bit stubbish. I am not expert in drawing, gods know I cannot do so myself. And it could just be the illusion created by her shirt/coat but her arms really do appear a bit short.
Wow man, nice job. I pretty much like all the fan-art you put out.
You know what, I GIVE UP!! Seriously, I give up!
She looks depressed... still good job though. You know, you shouldn't give up, you can't expect to be perfect everytime this is still a lot better than a lot of people can do. Make the art yours...make it your own style, Never quit!
-sigh- hun no one is telling you, your artwork sucks or that you should quit it. We are trying to give you constructive cricticism. Be grateful that we are willing to try and help you improve your artwork.
i cant see it
she looks too muscular
Aweee you suck XD (for tricking me like that) but your pic is very awesome so I forgive you I myself PRAISE you for actually giving her some muscle tone, I think it's hot.
Hands look kinda flat (need some shading for definition), but are in preportion so it's not too bad.
I like the soft lines that are done in brown for the drawing too, it looks really cool.
You did a very great job! I've seen your gallery before; you're an awesome artist.
it looks like hinata was forced to take that picture. from the expression you gave she doesnt seem very happy with whats she doing. besides pictures like these dont fit a character like hinata.
but the art and colouring are good.. there no doubt about that dude
Quite the nice drawing. Keep up the good work!
ooooh i liked that drawing, lol, but ya hinatas head seemed a little out of porportion
it says i'm not allowed to see it? Do i have to register or sumthing?
Yeah, you need to have a deviantart account to view it.
Great! But when i scroll down too her waist down, i loose intrest...
Lol, the art may suck, but I can see there is alot of perverts here. One, Rashman, exactly who would be happy taking a picture like that???!
Oh god, why did I click on this thread? Probably because your name was in it. :/
Keep it up.
Hinata's face is a bit too long. You might want to fix it by moving her chin up abit.
Her arms seem very short and cramped. I don't know how you can fix it now though.
I really don't like nude pics, make her put some clothes on!
You should darken your shading abit, it's too bright.
However, your art is very good and I hope to see more!
Teh, Haruka out of all people...You speak as if I have a Wacom...Anyways, thanks for the "critiques" guys.
Also, your style changed. I miss it.
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I feel bad that I immediately clicked on this thread when I read the title....
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wow dime you overreact, freaking gorw up n take some critisism. People are only suggesting what they think would make the image better. Wow you know im take graphics art in school you kill yourself here if your like this when someone says its a good picture jus this would make it evenb etter, so grow up man, take ppls opinions in to consideration, if you dont like their ideas then dont use em that simple.
And if you don't like that, DX gots two words for you...
It says the link is not there, I have seen alot of your pics before and like them, adn would love to see this too, if you get the link fixed could you let me know, thanks
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