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Discussion in 'Naruto Fanworks' started by Tomochii-Chan, Jan 9, 2008.

  1. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    Please click on the original link to see a bigger pic of it :nod

    Hope you guys like it :sweat

    Yeah I know there's a LOT of things I messed up on...:doh
     
  2. Haylerzz Member

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    I love their outfits and the shading. I like how you used the super thick lines around the outside and the really fine, light shading and thiner lines for the details. Their expressions are really cute!

    The only thing that looks off to me is Sakura's legs. Their a little short compared to her upper body... It's really hard to judge proportions when you can't see the whole figure. I usually rough out the whole body even if I plan on cropping part of it out later, just to make it easyer
     
  3. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    Hmm, yeah you're right. Her legs do seem short o.0 I'll edit that later...
    I didn't have room on my paper so I couldn't draw the whole body :sweat

    Thanks for the comment! smile-big
     
  4. Denji Noctis Lucis Caelum

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    You got both of the characters down pretty well, such as their faces and hair. Their outfits are nice, as is the shading and their poses. Sakura's left hand looks a bit strange, and is noticeably larger than the right. Regardless, I really like it!:amuse
     
  5. DeterminedIdiot Stand For What You Believe In

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    this is very cute and cool. but i think sasuke is making a move with his hand on her hip:LOS
     
  6. ShadowReij Wanderer

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    Very nice and very cute reminds me of cardcaptors. reps
     
  7. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    I tried editing her hands because I messed on on paper :doh I guess I should edit it more :sweat

    And thank you! :love

    *cough* of course :shifty

    XD Thanks!

    Thank you! :iria
     
  8. the_notorious_Z.É. The Pirate Prime minister

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    The draw is pretty cool, Sakura face and hair is looking alot like Allen Walker from D.Gray-Man! lol
     
  9. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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  10. nefer_sbedjieb Hope's Jinchuuriki

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    sakura's eyes are cute. their clothes couldn't be better. I love it! are you planning to paint it?
     
  11. Tefax not here

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    :WOW amazing job
    Love their clothes :iria
     
  12. dodgekfc Kakashi all the way

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    there outfits are nice nd sakura looks good nd so does sasuke even know i hate him
     
  13. Tossino And so we pray...

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    Sasuke in a sweater like that. He's... hot in it. x''D I love their expressions, and Sasuke's eyes are made in a very original style (I have no idea how though). I would love to see it coloured. :iria
     
  14. Lycanthropy This Battle Will Be Won ♥

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    Very cute, and I love their outfits, especially Sakura. I think her legs might be a bit too thin though.
     
  15. FoxSpirit &#803

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    Very nice piece of art! Sasuke and Sakura look very well drawn with new outfits and sweeter faces. Looks very clean and neat, would like to see this one colored :amuse
     
  16. Empress stop looking here

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    that's so cute! :wtf

    will you color it??
     
  17. Para bailar la bamba Advisor

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    Aww; colour it!
     
  18. kyoko-chan New Member

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    wow... i envy your talent... GOOD JOB!!! keep up the great work!
     
  19. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    WAAAH!! @__@ SO many replies! I thought this thread died! XD

    Thanks so much! :wtf I'm probably going to, though I'm going to have to read a lot of tutorials for it since I can't color :sweatdrop

    Arigato! >///<

    Thankies! 8]

    I just love Sasuke in casual clothes :LOS and Thank you! ^__^
    I'll hopefully color it when I have time.

    Thanks! I'll have to try editing that then XD

    Sankyuuz! :dance
    I'll hopefully color it when exams are over
    and when I'm not lazy XDD


    Thanks!
    I might >8]

    I'll try! :ruri

    Thanks so much!
     
  20. Sakura Active Member

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    niiice! add some color <3
     
  21. Byakk? sort of cute

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    It's very odd but very cute, i like it. :thumbs
     
  22. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    Thanks! :dance
    I will soon!

    hopefully....
     
  23. Tossino And so we pray...

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    This is the first time I've seen him in it. :LOS It fits him really well.
    I'll wait. :LOS
     
  24. Franklin Stein Judgment...On....

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    looks good nice job i like sakura lol
     
  25. Raiden I'm with <b><font color="#ff6600">COCO</font></b>

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    Very nice, Sasuke and Sakura both look very delighted in your drawing. Your usage of shading on Sakura was very well done, I don't think shading at the back of Sasuke's hair was necessary. The choice in casual clothing was a good one, Sakura's outfit reminds me of Sailor Moon. I like that way that you have done both of their eyes, Sasuke's eyes looking like deep pools of obsidian and though Sakura's eyes aren't colored, they seem bright. You should color this and posssibly even add a background.
     
  26. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    Well, I actually got the idea from this pic
    X

    :kloff he looks so hot in it XDD

    Thanks! :dance
     
  27. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    Thank you for the comments! :nod
    Everyone is telling me to color so I should XD

    I was thinking about adding a background though I'm not very good at that stuff >__> And I wouldn't really know what to put as a background :doh
     
  28. momolade Active Member

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    tomo your getting so good :wtf

    no problems with proportions as far as i can see
    clothes are adorable
    it needs to be coloured <3
     
  29. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    MOMO!!! :kloff

    :glomp
    I thank you :awesome

    Yes, I'm starting to, eeeh but don't expect much :doh
     
  30. chocy Active Member

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    Oh this is so adorable! I like Sakura's outfit, it's really unique.:) I guess Sakura's right hand seem a little smaller than her left. The shading is really nice.:)
     
  31. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    Wait, I can't tell with is the right, her right or mine? :doh

    *is stupid*

    Not the one Sasuke is holding right? XD lol and thanks for the compliment! :)
     
  32. chocy Active Member

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    Haha, it's her right hand. It seems smaller than her left hand. But it could also be due to the fact that it is covered halfway by her sleeve. Her right fingers seem slightly shorter than her left fingers too. But on the whole, it is really good. Though I am not a fan of SasuSaku, this pic looks really sweet and I like it.
     
  33. Yakushi Kabuto Socks Activate! Shape of a Retired Smod

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    They look so young and sweet together. I like your little bits of shading, particularly for the hair. The outfits look good on them, it is nice to see them in casual wear and the pose is nice. The way he is holding her is kind of odd, is he helping her skate or something? I just get the impression that he's watchfully holding her like that just in case she falls over. XD
     
  34. SamiWiecieKto observing all around

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    Cute ^-^, IMHO everything is fine tough I would like to see it coloured ^O^
     
  35. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    Oh ok XD I always thought the fingers look...thinner? I'm not sure :doh I'll see if I can edit it somehow cause I started coloring it and I don't want to mess it up now XD

    lol Thank you! I have no idea why I drew Sasuke holding her like that...maybe I just wanted to practice two people together since i have trouble with that (like hugging, holding hands, etc.) Looks like to me that Sasuke was holding her because he's overprotective or something XD

    But it does seem like their skating...without the ice skates :laugh

    Thanks! I'm coloring it right now actually ^__^
     
  36. Fabulous Yellow Flash

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    Very nice lines and shading. Cant wait to see painted version of it :amuse
     
  37. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    Cute! You draw really good!!! YOU GOTS TALENT!
     
  39. PATRON this is all pointless

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    geez, why are there so many great artist in the nf
     
  40. Sasuke rip

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    Wow...looks amazing :wtf

    Seriously that's great..speechless.
     
  41. ~rocka Baking Bread~

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    Wow very nice :D, love the outfits and the shading smile-big.
     
  42. maximilyan The Truth

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    I dont like the pairing :pek

    but still the art work is really good. i like sasuke's outfit.
     
  43. Rion Ryuzaki ̣

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    That's soo cute! You did a awesome job! :thumbs
     
  44. Tomochii-Chan Tsun-tsun-dere, tsun-tsun~

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    Wow, thanks o.o
    I thought this thread died already XD

    And if you guys are wondering, I colored it already :nod
    X
     

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