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Old 03-03-2012, 04:09 PM   #901
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oh I found a good one. sakura turning a 180 on naruto after the sasuke retrieval arc, naruto actually succeeds, but one glance at a beaten up sasuke, sakura forgets her thoughts of naruto after he left the front gates and hates naruto with ever fiber of her being. totally unrealistic.
You've pretty much encompassed 75% of NaruHina and Sakura-bashing fics there

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Old 03-03-2012, 04:11 PM   #902
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And this is why proofreading is important.
She actually got angry with me and wouldn't fact check or correct it. I gave up.

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Old 03-03-2012, 04:12 PM   #903
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which is one of the reasons why i hate the pairing but thats another story

you don't have to bash sakura to get another pairing in.

there's this one fic where naruto becomes raikage set after part 1...i dont know HOW you could possibly make any sense in that.

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Old 03-03-2012, 04:15 PM   #904
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She actually got angry with me and wouldn't fact check or correct it. I gave up.
There's no reasoning with some people. Have you ever encountered one of those authors that has a big notice on their fics saying they don't want any critique or anything but 100% positive feedback?

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Old 03-03-2012, 04:19 PM   #905
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^ Proper response to "NO FLAMING!" should be "NO POSTING!"

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Old 03-03-2012, 04:22 PM   #906
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^ Oh absolutely. If you share it on the internet, you're opening yourself to flames/critique and possibly praise. It's part of the deal.

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Old 03-03-2012, 04:23 PM   #907
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There's no reasoning with some people. Have you ever encountered one of those authors that has a big notice on their fics saying they don't want any critique or anything but 100% positive feedback?
I have. I don't give them feedback, as a rule. And the ones that demand feedback as ransom for a new chapter with get nothing as well. Which is sometimes a shame.

I wish more people who favorite my stories would say something but I don't ask. I write for myself, so anything I get is a bonus. It would just be nice to see what people do or don't like sometimes.

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putting japanese words in with english. nuff said.

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Dat name!

And I think that the author's ending notes are longer than the chapters themselves.

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putting japanese words in with english. nuff said.
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putting japanese words in with english. nuff said.
I don't mind some, if it's a cultural reference or concept that would be awkward to translate as casual speaking.

Some people also put the Japanese names of foods in their stories and although I dislike interrupting the story to look them up, I do because I like to know and generally it's something I am completely unfamiliar with, so it's helpful.

But there are English words for "thank you," "sorry," "idiot," etc. and it's probably not necessary to use the Japanese words.

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I have. I don't give them feedback, as a rule. And the ones that demand feedback as ransom for a new chapter with get nothing as well. Which is sometimes a shame.
Yeah they get nothing from me either. The fact that they feel that entitled to reviews is almost on par with reviewers who think the author is their bitch (thankfully never happened to me) and will change the story/add the reviewer's favourite pairings/whatever just because they ask.

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This is my exact attitude. As I rule if I favourite something it means I really like it, so it's only fair to let the author know why.

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putting japanese words in with english. nuff said.
I agree with this to an extent, but don't mind Japanese for fandom-specific terms like jutsu names and words that just don't translate. Suffixes are okay too.

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i always found cute>kawaii anyway.

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What about "the silk-sheathed steel that proclaimed him male"? It exists. Though it was brought up on a badfic com. so I have no idea where it originally came from.

Story was probably deleted; Google couldn't give me anything other than this thread, haha.

Oh my god though; I don't know whether to laugh, cry, or scream. Probably all.

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Old 03-03-2012, 04:50 PM   #914
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^ It probably was yeah. And those are all very viable options. I was torn between hysterical laughter and head-desking.

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Admittedly though, I prefer it over something like "cock." I fucking hate that word.

I usually end up using something like "shaft" or "length" though I suppose maybe they're a bit...odd?

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Old 03-03-2012, 05:20 PM   #916
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Admittedly though, I prefer it over something like "cock." I fucking hate that word.
If I'm reading a lemon, I don't mind its use. But when I'm the one writing it, I try my best to avoid it at all costs.
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Such simplicity annoys me...

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^^ It's a very YMMV thing I guess. I think it sounds kinda crude if people use words like cock excessively (every single time it's mentioned being my definition), saying it once or twice I don't really have a problem with. But I don't read that many lengthy sex scenes so...yeah.

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Admittedly though, I prefer it over something like "cock." I fucking hate that word.

I usually end up using something like "shaft" or "length" though I suppose maybe they're a bit...odd?
Length sounds odd.

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To quote one of my A/Ns:

I see things like that all the time. People should be a bit more creative.

But, that silk sheathed steel thing still has me laughin'. It sounds like something that would be in one of Jiraiya's books.

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I agree, it is annoying as hell when people constantly use romaji in their fanfictions.
Good example of putting romaji in English fanfics:
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The kunoichi was taken back by Naruto's action, but found the time to take the gift. "A-Ara, Kawaii. Domo arigato gozaimasu Naruto kun." She replied while fighting back the tint of pink that threatened to form on her cheeks. Her baka of a teamate did have his rare moments, but she couldn't let him know that.

These words gave Naruto an undescribable amount of relief. " Sugoi, I was afraid you wouldn't like the-" At that moment a stone had been thrown an hit Naruto right between the eyes.

"Oi, baka. What do you think you're doing?" Said the raven haired shinobi, who was sitting casually on the neighboring rooftop. "Instead of being an baka, how about you get ready for our mission, dope." the sole survivor of the Uchiha added bluntly.

"Itai, Itai, Itai..." the blonde muttered. "Oi, Sasuke do you need me to kick your ass again?" Naruto smirked as he saw his remark sparked a reaction from him. "Doesn't matter if I'm a baka, because I'm still stronger than youuuu." The blonde added in a mocking tone.

Sakura covered her face with the palm of her hand as the two shinobi began to bicker back and forth. "For Kami's sake, you're both baka as far as I'm concerned." Despite her actions, she would cherish these moments with her nakama for the rest of her life.

Some authors have no idea how irritating this is for people who practice both languages.


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I agree, it is annoying as hell when people constantly use romaji in their fanfictions.

Some authors have no idea how irritating this is for people who practice both languages.
Ugh that's terrible

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