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Old 02-07-2012, 04:20 PM   #641
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Then I advise you stay a galaxy's diameter away from 'Eroninja' at all times

There's a new girl added every chapter (or more than one on rare occasions).....and there's now 22 chapters....


It's been recently updated. tsunami this time

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Old 02-07-2012, 05:48 PM   #642
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Then I advise you stay a galaxy's diameter away from 'Eroninja' at all times

There's a new girl added every chapter (or more than one on rare occasions).....and there's now 22 chapters....
But isn't Eroninja just smut?

I think that he was talking about stories that have a 'serious' plot and the protagonist ends up with more than 3 girls. Unlike smut that needs a flat plot to have the protagonist end up with a bunch of girls.

Spoiler:
Not that that's bad since I'm pretty sure we don't read smut for the story.

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Old 02-07-2012, 05:58 PM   #643
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But isn't Eroninja just smut?

I think that he was talking about stories that have a 'serious' plot and the protagonist ends up with more than 3 girls. Unlike smut that needs a flat plot to have the protagonist end up with a bunch of girls.

Spoiler:
Not that that's bad since I'm pretty sure we don't read smut for the story.
'Just smut'?

You say that like its a bad thing

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Old 02-07-2012, 06:07 PM   #644
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My biggest is when the story has only two paragraph splits. One after the first author note and one before the last author note. Alternative universe fics and self inserting is annoying too.

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Old 02-07-2012, 06:08 PM   #645
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"A big box is mysteriously dropped off at my door and addressed to me, the only problem is that in the box are the sand siblings, the former rookie nine, their sensei, Sai, Team Gai, and the Akatsuki and they're all 6 inch chibis! Rated T for language"


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Old 02-07-2012, 06:10 PM   #646
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'Just smut'?

You say that like its a bad thing
Did you read my spoiler?

Besides, smut >>>>>>>> other stories.

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Old 02-07-2012, 06:12 PM   #647
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"A big box is mysteriously dropped off at my door and addressed to me, the only problem is that in the box are the sand siblings, the former rookie nine, their sensei, Sai, Team Gai, and the Akatsuki and they're all 6 inch chibis! Rated T for language"

Sounds like fun!

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"A big box is mysteriously dropped off at my door and addressed to me, the only problem is that in the box are the sand siblings, the former rookie nine, their sensei, Sai, Team Gai, and the Akatsuki and they're all 6 inch chibis! Rated T for language"
Oh...wow....

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Old 02-07-2012, 06:15 PM   #649
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"A big box is mysteriously dropped off at my door and addressed to me, the only problem is that in the box are the sand siblings, the former rookie nine, their sensei, Sai, Team Gai, and the Akatsuki and they're all 6 inch chibis! Rated T for language"

I freaking busted out laughing when reading this.

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Old 02-07-2012, 06:35 PM   #650
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Did you read my spoiler?

Besides, smut >>>>>>>> other stories.
I missed it

Nice

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Old 02-07-2012, 07:55 PM   #651
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Sakura bashing. Just because I like SasuNaru doesn't mean I hate sakura. Sakura bashing get annoying after a while

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Old 02-07-2012, 08:58 PM   #652
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It's been recently updated. tsunami this time
I know, that's why I said '22 chapters'. SMH.

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But isn't Eroninja just smut?

I think that he was talking about stories that have a 'serious' plot and the protagonist ends up with more than 3 girls. Unlike smut that needs a flat plot to have the protagonist end up with a bunch of girls.

Spoiler:
Not that that's bad since I'm pretty sure we don't read smut for the story.
He's tried all the best to integrate story and smut, but everything went wrong the moment bijuus were jumping into new human bodies. Besides, the whole 'plot' revolves around the fact that a lot of the women Naruto gets with are simply brainwashed. Not exactly sound footing from an ethical standpoint.

But as a whole, yes, serious fics with more than one woman aren't really viable anymore.

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Old 02-08-2012, 06:06 PM   #653
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Character bashing is annoying. Just because I don't like a character doesn't mean I want to see them bashed. On the contrary, I want to see them depicted in a realistic manner.

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Old 02-09-2012, 12:53 PM   #654
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Kurenai Yuhi is assigned to babysit a teenage girl who is a Infantilist and is nervous about doing so. What happens when a drunken Tsunade ask Hinata to help her teacher pratice by putting on a diaper? Warning story contains diaper usage and ABDL content

What the hell is this?

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Old 02-09-2012, 06:17 PM   #655
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I actually read the entire thing out of curosity...

Not a good move on my part.

It got weird really fast. I'd say around the time they shop for flexible diapers and baby powder so the adults wearing them don't get rashes.

To each their own I guess.

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Old 02-09-2012, 07:03 PM   #656
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Wow, can't believe you actually read that.

What the hell is this?

I'm not going to read it since I'm all out of any alcoholic beverages... and I'm also sure that it will make me want to shoot myself.

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Old 02-09-2012, 11:01 PM   #657
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My Pet Peeves most of these have probably been said but here is my .02cents

-Multiple spelling mistakes - It only takes a minute to use the goddamn spellchecker really. Also constantly misspelling character names and locations wrong. Especially when someone writes a character's name five different ways. (I shit you not, I come across fics where a person kept spelling Tsunade: Tsuede, Tsunede, and Tsuneda...yea not once was it spelled right. When in doubt, use GOOGLE it may save your life!

-Multiple mismatched wording, like having 'Lets' instead of 'That's', They instead of There or Their, Drew instead of Draw or Threw or Through or Thought or Thorough or Throw. Also constantly spelling women when it should be woman and vice versa, the same applies for getting he and she mixed up. Also reading a sentence that IS missing a word.

-Proper Capitalization, it shouldn't kill someone to reach over their keyboard with their freaking pinky finger to hold the SHIFT key to capitalize a LETTER.

No use of quotation marks...I just...argh! I can't distinguish between a character speaking and not speaking without either '' or ""

Unable to tell if a character is speaking or thinking, without the use of '', "", or Italics.

Constant switching between Narratives : An author is either going to do 1st person point of view or 3rd person point of view, nevermind the 2nd narrative.

This is an example: I was walking down the street, with her head raised to sky because I suddenly felt droplets of rain fall to her face. She was startled by the feeling and then I wished I brought my umbrella with me that day. *cringes from just writing that*

Rushed story telling, where all you get is

Character a "speaking"

Character b "speaking"

And a little sentence or two that's suppose to describe everything going on in one chapter...okay 3_3

Constant repetition of the same word, sentence, or oddly worded metaphors and similes that don't make sense and make whatever is being described come out sounding just WTF.

Look I ain't looking for no overly drawn out fic with too many details that's just as bad, but people can take their time to actually put in more effort in giving good descriptions of the world and the characters.

Harem stories that:

MUST have all the girls that are listed to be in the harem only having eyes for the one guy, completely disregarding the other male cast, if there are other males in the cast of the particular series.

If male characters are mentioned, they tend to end up being assholes for some unexplained or wholly OOC half assed reason for the girls to hook up and fall in love (usually very quickly and without any real reasoning)with the intended guy in the story just to get to the lemon. Because most badly done harem fics go this route.

Also making the unrealistic assumption that the six or god forbid twenty something women in this harem are all a-OKAY with sharing the one guy who is just as unrealistically unable to deal with the REAL stress of providing and caring for these women. I'm not even going to go into the fact that characters are not even given enough development for most of the harem stories to even work out.

OOCness to the third degree! Unless it's meant to be for a purpose. Or for mock fics.

OC's that overtake the goddamn plot!

Badly done OC/X-character pairings.

Horribly done self-inserts

Stories in which the characters quickly fall in love

Extreme character bashing

fics that mislead you into thinking you are going to read about a certain pairing only for it to end up being about another one...and most likely one you hate

Getting reviews, while appreciated is quite WTFish when someone gets a review from a person, who, having read an obvious story about a pairing that they don't like and MUST tell the writer they don't then follow it up with: it's a good story...I really can care whether you don't support the pairing or not or your life story if you're the type that feel they must let me know about it. Look if the story is good say so, if you can't enjoy it because it's X/X pairing just don't bother to review at all. *eye rolls*

Also reviewers who think they MUST tell you what pairing to write about or what NOT to write about. GTFO plz.

Reviews that just outright flame you and not the story.

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Old 02-09-2012, 11:20 PM   #658
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I hate it when people do the stereotypes for the character and not even bother to put a little twist to it. Also, I hate 2nd person narratives unless they're really, really good.

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Old 02-10-2012, 10:46 AM   #659
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Wow, can't believe you actually read that.

What the hell is this?

I'm not going to read it since I'm all out of any alcoholic beverages... and I'm also sure that it will make me want to shoot myself.
Believe me, that urge is guaranteed.

By far some of the most awkard and bizarre shit I have ever read in any fanfiction. There was nothing that could prepare me for a disturbingly detailed description of 14 year old Hinata casually getting her 'diaper' changed by Kurenai to give her experience at being a mother. Nor could anything prepare me for the OCs' organization that might as well been led by Pedo Bear himself.

Needless to say, I needed alot of mindsoap afterwards.

Again, to each their own.

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I hate it when people do the stereotypes for the character and not even bother to put a little twist to it. Also, I hate 2nd person narratives unless they're really, really good.
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