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Old 01-27-2012, 11:13 AM   #601
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I think there's a difference when you translate the name of a Japanese location into English rather than have London 50 kilometers away from Konoha.

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I came upon a fic that had a standard summary and I said, "hey, why not? I'll give this a try."

It wasn't until I read the first sentences that I found it to be a highschool fic in disguise, I feel so betrayed now.

In a totally different note, to those of you that write. How the hell do you manage to keep your interest? I just started writing and I already feel like stopping.

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I came upon a fic that had a standard summary and I said, "hey, why not? I'll give this a try."

It wasn't until I read the first sentences that I found it to be a highschool fic in disguise, I feel so betrayed now.

In a totally different note, to those of you that write. How the hell do you manage to keep your interest? I just started writing and I already feel like stopping.
It takes a bit of work. You need to take your plot bunny and dissect it, making notes, then describe it for your readers. If you know where you want to end up, you can work backward from there. An outline is pretty important if you want to maintain consistency and maintain pacing. Make notes of things random thoughts that occur to you and craft them into the story as you write.

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It takes a bit of work. You need to take your plot bunny and dissect it, making notes, then describe it for your readers. If you know where you want to end up, you can work backward from there. An outline is pretty important if you want to maintain consistency and maintain pacing. Make notes of things random thoughts that occur to you and craft them into the story as you write.
Well, my story is a parody which means that I won't be caring about the plot much but the thing I have trouble with is keeping the comedy consistent.

I do think that writing down some thoughts would help, I'm always glued to my phone anyway; but the only thing I have a problem with is that I'm not what you call a 'motivated' person. I want to want to write, not think of it as a chore.

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6599632/1/Bleach_Fan_Works

Basically a fic about bad fanfics

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Old 01-28-2012, 08:11 PM   #607
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Temari has birthday, she wants to go to Konoha. She has a wonderful time, right? You find out by reading duh. RxR

Now they insult the reader in summaries? That "duh" was unneccesary.

And that story was awful. On a seperate note, FF.Net says they're cutting back on spammers!

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I do think that writing down some thoughts would help, I'm always glued to my phone anyway; but the only thing I have a problem with is that I'm not what you call a 'motivated' person. I want to want to write, not think of it as a chore.
Hmmmm. Well, since it's a parody, you can relax a bit. Just don't make it too over the top. As for getting motivation, I hear where you're coming from. I'm trying to start my own story, but I haven't been able to do a single thing. I guess it depends on how much you want to do it.

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Bodygaurds fics who are not supposed to fall in love.

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I once saw a fic called 'Naruto - The elder scrolls'

I was like and read. It was in fact about old scrolls and not dragons, oblivion gates or khajit liars whatsoever

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Character bashing. I can't fucking stand it. I also hate the portrayal of the council like they can overpower the Hokage. Bullshit.

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Old 01-29-2012, 11:00 AM   #611
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Character bashing. I can't fucking stand it. I also hate the portrayal of the council like they can overpower the Hokage. Bullshit.
What about council bashing? I've seen a lot of those floating around.

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Old 01-29-2012, 11:16 AM   #612
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Council bashing it's pretty popular for some reason. I even read a story in which Minato and Kushina were alive and killed the whole council right in front of a bunch of people.

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I didn't even know there was a council

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Old 01-30-2012, 09:55 AM   #614
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Council bashing it's pretty popular for some reason. I even read a story in which Minato and Kushina were alive and killed the whole council right in front of a bunch of people.
That's one fic I'll be sure to avoid.

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I didn't even know there was a council
Remember when Kakashi was about to be Hokage? That's the council, I think.

Can anyone make sense out of this summary?

What if Naruto had his mother's bloodline? What if Naruto discovered who his father was at the age of 5? What if Naruto decided to train in his bloodline secretly and away from the village? WARNING: POWERFUL GREY SMART NARUTO AND SASUKE BASHING! FEM HAKU!

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Old 01-30-2012, 10:27 AM   #615
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Wasn't Minato, well, Minato at the age of 5?

I read some of the story and came upon an AN...

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So two people are the council

I'd love a fic where Naruto finds out his Uzumaki heritage....but he doesn't hav a bloodline And doesn't change his name to 'Namikaze'

Uzumaki ftw

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I meant these guys. In the top left panel:


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I think that the guy meant Naruto being five years old and finding out who Minato was.

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I think there's a difference when you translate the name of a Japanese location into English rather than have London 50 kilometers away from Konoha.
The very thought of the latter makes me want to puke. Actually, for me, that depends on how well it's pulled off. After I went through the story and made sure that all of the hidden village and country names were in English, I realized that the Japanese word 'shinobi' was still in the title lol.

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I don't find "shinobi" any better or worse than "ninja." What else would you call them?

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